Just the conclusion left and a lot of revision. Main things that need changing are Literature review - add and take out sections according to the results, Methodology - detail and justify my adaptations to Hewings' framework, Results and Discussion - change order so the two are integrated. The conclusion will include limitations and a summary and some other things probably but I can't remember what right now. I also need to rewrite the introduction and the first chapter saying that the study will be descriptive.